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Pranay went home a bit early that
day. He was busy packing stuff for his temporary Delhi transfer. However, his attention was more
on Myrah. It all seemed surreal to him. There was something mysterious about
the girl, something more mysterious about the events that unfolded just a day
back. How he had been trying so hard to find her but just when he lost all
hope, everything turned around magically in his favour? He didn’t understand
the reason why he was so attracted to her? There was a strange connection.
With such questions darting his
mind, he was left perturbed.
Next morning, he boarded the
flight to Delhi, with a lot of butterflies in his stomach. A new phase of his
life was soon to begin…..
In Delhi, he frequently met Myrah,
almost every day. Over a cup of coffee, for a walk around Connaught place, over
dinner, lunch, on a movie date. They were
deeply madly in love and were quite open about their relationship.
Almost a year had passed since they were dating.
That day they had gone to watch a chick flick and while coming back Pranay proposed her for marriage.
A tear rolled down Myrah’s cheek.
Pranay didn’t quite expect this. Before he could react and understand the whole
situation, Myrah said, “Pinch me. It is all too good to be true.”
Pranay kissed on her forehead and
said” I Love you. There is nothing and no one on this planet I have loved more
than you. What is it My? “
Out of love and affection Pranay
sometimes called her 'My'
Wiping the tears she said "Nothing baby I am just too delighted.“
After a short pause she asked “Do
you believe in destiny Pranay?”
“Not that much. I believe Man
alone has the power to shape up his future”, replied Pranay.
She smiled and said ” I was just
like you until I met you.”
“Ahh so everything changed in the
past 1 year?”, questioned Pranay.
“No, everything changed 8 years
back”
“What ? 8 years?”
“Ya. Have you ever come to Delhi
before?”
“Hmm ya.”
“Do you know Ridhima?”
“Ridhima ???”
“Ridhima Sinha”
“Ya she is my cousin sister. We
were very close when we were kids. So what about her? By the way how do you know her? I do not
remember mentioning her to you.”
“8 years back. Her dad was posted
in Delhi. I was her neighbor then. We were
best friends and our still very close. She used to talk a lot about you. She was in awe with Pranay Bhaiya. I mean as
she addressed you. I had fallen for you there itself “
“Wait a minute… “, interrupted
Pranay, “ As far as I remember her best friend was Chinu. Although, I met her
just once, she was a kid yaar. Plus, I remember she was not that attractive.
She had short hair. Sported thick glasses and was overweight.”
“Pranay, I am the same Chinu.”
“What???? Please do not joke. You do not really look
like her. “
“I got laser done. So, no thick glasses anymore. About being overweight, no one likes to be teased as a fatty. I worked out sincerely to get back in shape. Lastly the hair, it’s not a big deal to grow them. Pranay, 8 yrs is a long time. Back then, I was in my early teens. And now I am a young woman. Changes are inevitable.”
Pranay was stunned. He was too shocked to react.
“I loved you then but you never
noticed. Whenever you came down to stay with Ridhima, I used to find
ways to see you, observe you. I was
madly in love with you. But I guess you never noticed me. I was just a 16yr old
ugly looking girl and you, a 21 yr old young, smart looking guy, probably dating
some hot chick."
Myrah continued, "Shortly, Ridhima’s dad got a
transfer to Mumbai. There was no chance of getting in touch with you leave
aside a relationship."
After a pause she continued, "I dated a few guys after that but none of my relationships went well. I realized I already had a bench mark set. It was you. No guy could even reach close to it. I feared of losing my best friend so never discussed this with Ridhima. Hence, my love for you never surfaced.
After a pause she continued, "I dated a few guys after that but none of my relationships went well. I realized I already had a bench mark set. It was you. No guy could even reach close to it. I feared of losing my best friend so never discussed this with Ridhima. Hence, my love for you never surfaced.
However, I was always in touch with Ridhima.
I kept getting your updates. I knew you were in Mumbai struggling hard, working
hard. "
"A year back, I was in Mumbai for
a 2 day conference . I knew you were in Mumbai but didn’t get to the details
of knowing where and all. But my deepest desire was to see you at least once. I could never in my wildest dreams, imagine
getting in a relationship with you. It all looked quixotic. The second day was about to end.
I wrapped up my work and called for a cab to drop me to the company guest house. With a heavy heart and unfulfilled desire of not seeing you I
started walking towards the exit gate"
"Look at the odds of the
situation, you popped up out of nowhere. I knew u were my Pranay instantly. I had
seen your pictures on Facebook."
"It is all DESTINY, Pranay.
It cannot be ruled out as a
coincidence that I came for a conference in a company in Mumbai.
It can’t be a coincidence that
the building was just adjacent to your office.
It can’t be a coincidence that
you met me again in Delhi.
It can’t be a coincidence that
you got a transfer to Delhi."
"It’s all the game of Destiny."
"I have been loving you since 8
years but when I came to term with your absence in my life. You entered my
life again and turned things around instantly. This time you started loving me the way I
loved you.”
As she finished she saw Pranay
almost in tears. He was not able to say anything. He hugged her tight. He
wrapped her in his arms, trying to protect her from the world. He felt a
strange possessiveness for her. He had a gem, a gem he didn’t want to lose.
Nice and simple story.......thoughts are well arranged. I read all part in one shot and found very interesting. Keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteHey,
DeleteThanks for dropping by and appreciating the story.
Sorry! But I am in tears :) It was beautiful I am speechless, you have an amzaing art of capturing the reader's attention Neha, It was as if I was watching a movie. I wish I could write like you someday :) Absolutely brilliant. I read all the parts & I could very well connect with the protagonists. Glad I dropped by :) Take care! Keep writing & I would be the first to comment :D
ReplyDeleteHey Tanya,
DeleteThanks for dropping by. It's good to see that the reader connect with what I write. It's definitely encouraging.
Keep blogging, keep smiling!
lovely :)... I believe in destiny...
ReplyDeleteHey Sandeep,
DeleteThanks. :)
Ok.. to start with, I read all 4 parts of your story. With each part it takes you to the next level of emotions, situations and feeling ranging from a MNC work culture to the love life.. Everything just properly placed. Flow of the story is very good and you're good at bringing the right amount of emotions.. Good job Neha :)
ReplyDeleteI would love to read more of you..
Hey Rahul,
DeleteIt feels good to see that u enjoyed reading the post as much as I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for patiently waiting for all the parts. :)
It is so beautiful, well written
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteHey Neha,
ReplyDeletegood one yaar... short and sweet story neha :) loved it...
keep writing...u wud be writer soon...
Hey Neha,
ReplyDeleteI loved the way u write neha, ur writing connects with reader instantly...I been lucky to read all the 4 parts in one go... because each part make u so curious to know what wud b next?... this hidden talent of urs is news to me...
Keep Writing and sharing ... becz I njoy reading ur stuff...
Rgds,
Preeti
Hello Preeti,
DeleteThanks :)
Will definitely keep u entertained with more such posts.
Best Regards,
Neha Sharma
Good one neha...Short, simple, cute, lovely amd romantic story....Keep writing..:))
ReplyDeleteThanks Kinjal.... :)
DeleteThis is a really perfect story really bloomed the flowers of love in my heart . Each and every part of the story was perfectly placed and satisfies the previous one .... well neha mam i can't say anything else as i am a beginner blogger .. my posts you can read on kasareharshal@blogspot.com . Well I can say this story resembles with my one a little especially the MG girl part !!! ohh just kidding I am just 16 now !! Nice one !! keep writing & keep smiling :)
ReplyDeleteaahh its been two years since you posted....was completely unaware of your passion for writing.There is certainly a writer inside you let him breathe so keep writing gal :)
ReplyDeleteJus loved it :) :)
ReplyDeleteVery well written story. All the parts build the perfect suspense and force you to read the next part.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
Perfectly moulded story!!!
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